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Bearded Dragon by MikiDawn577 Bearded Dragon :iconmikidawn577:MikiDawn577 1 0
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Jewels' Memoirs
    Sunlight penetrated the entrance to Jewels’ cave, sending the mornings warmth to brighten the dark recesses of her home on the side of the valley. Down below her rider slept with her mate, her own mate lay behind her with his black tail interlaced with her own colour shifting tail. She still remembered meeting Shadow and his rider Killer, neither of them from earth, but their dynamic as rider and dragon was beyond perfect. As a Shimmer it was always difficult to find a male dragon – even of her own kind or a Chameleon – to mate with, the arrival of this large black Spine Ridge was who she unknowingly was waiting for. Both of their riders fell in love upon seeing each other, brightening both of their drab lives. The Order did not agree to the marriage bond between Crystal and Killer, but the dragons supported the two; the dragons had not given interest in a marriage in written history and so the Order was forced to accept the terms of bondage. Crysta
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Dragons Pt1 Ch8
The ground was fast approaching, and Pyrope still wasn’t able to fully open her wings to stop her descent. Annalice was petrified, for she was reaching out trying to help Pyrope from wherever she was.
   “Open your wings Pyrope; don’t worry about the trees around you, just open your wings!” Annalice was frightened for Pyrope but didn’t know what she could do to help her, this scared her, for she had to face the idea that she might lose her dragon.
As the ground continued to speed towards Pyrope saw something move around her. The sunlight poured through where the green had been above her, and a swirl of brown surrounded her, slowing her dangerous descent. A ripple of electricity streaked across the brown, none of the stream touched her but rather passed over her like water. Frightened she reached out to Annalice for comfort, but she could not feel her rider. With an empty sensation quickly welling up inside of her she curled up, pulling her
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R2's Contemplation
    A bright morning dawned across Yavin 4, the Masassi runes were just starting to come to life as pilots looked over their crafts with their mechanics. Droids were going around adding their bleeps and whirs to the murmur of individuals conversing in the morning. Two of these droids stood by, waiting for a general to appear from her chambers; she was one of the owners that the two had, where the other living one was located they didn’t exactly know.
   Rocking from side to side a R2 unit scanned the area, seeing other astromech droids and BB units with their corresponding pilots. This R2 unit had seen many battles, with two of the most notable pilots within the rebellion, both of which were force users. The Protocol droid standing beside him looked longingly out at the flight deck, for once he was quite, the R2 unit knew this silence wouldn’t last for long as he only stopped speaking when he was powered down or when something important was taking p
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Another picture from my Italy trip by MikiDawn577 Another picture from my Italy trip :iconmikidawn577:MikiDawn577 6 0
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Dragons Pt1 Ch7
Once outside Annalice and Pyrope followed an old overgrown pathway that wound around the outside of the meadow, knowing that it might not lead to the caves they didn’t stick to the path completely but angled towards the caves in the upper reaches of the mountains. The path wound past structures that fit in with the medieval era castles and the outcropping buildings associated with Welsh fortresses, yet these buildings were completely intact, no walls or roves missing. Just waiting for their previous Welsh owners to come and occupy them, but that would never happen, as the last occupants had died off many years ago in a grand battle. Exploring the buildings would happen at a later date as Annalice and Pyrope were heading towards the mountain face.
Annalice had stumbled and scraped herself up a fair bit from tripping over tree roots and from tripping over an overgrown bridge of vines; the bridge crossed a wide river but the bridge itself showed no sign of decay or aging. As it was
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Dragons Pt1 Ch6
Four hours passed before Annalice found a Grey Book on how to care for newly hatched Dragons, and one on a type of Dragon that fit Pyrope’s description. The book showed scaled diagrams of a Dragon that was not given a specific colour, but a list of colours that ranged from shades of white to shades of black and everything in between, with a notation explaining how the colours are not constant but change with the Dragons’ emotions. This was the reason why Pyrope’s scales were fluctuating in colour, as she had been excited when her scales became a more noticeable crimson colour that stood out against her surroundings, and why her scales were never a constant colour.
Laying the book open on the table, Annalice bent down to wake Pyrope up. Her scales were a true crimson colour, and there was an iridescent shimmer to her scales as the fire light flickered in the background.
Pyrope was fast asleep, so Annalice left her to sleep, but knew that if she did that the small Drago
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More from my trip to Italy by MikiDawn577 More from my trip to Italy :iconmikidawn577:MikiDawn577 4 0 More of Rome by MikiDawn577 More of Rome :iconmikidawn577:MikiDawn577 4 2
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Dragons Pt1 Ch5
Standing back up Annalice heard something splash into the pool at the bottom of the waterfall, thinking it was a large fish that she had not seen when she had first looked into the pool, Annalice headed back over to the trees and overgrown pathway. The only other form of life that Annalice happened upon other than the vast plant life were hare’s, wild guinea pigs, wild hamsters and the odd bird of prey flying after a song bird. The sky was clear, even though the trees blocked out the sky, although in the sections where the sky was visible it was covered in clouds that drifted by, and the birds that flew overhead in their many flocks.
Wandering through the forest Annalice found a tree that was situated in the centre of the path, but there weren’t any roots that came away from the base of the tree, adding to the strange serenity of the forest. Yet the sound of a creature thrashing through the undergrowth upset the serenity, whenever Annalice turned around she was unable to se
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Mount Etna! by MikiDawn577 Mount Etna! :iconmikidawn577:MikiDawn577 3 0 Panarama of Capri by MikiDawn577 Panarama of Capri :iconmikidawn577:MikiDawn577 2 2 Italy trip! (none of these will be in order) by MikiDawn577 Italy trip! (none of these will be in order) :iconmikidawn577:MikiDawn577 0 0
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Dragons Pt1 Ch4
The gem was extremely heavy, yet quite warm to the touch, and had the same texture as an egg would have that had been sitting in the fridge for a while. Annalice walked over to one of the two long tables and placed it on a clear place, placing it onto the table was a relief for it was great weight that she no longer had to hold. When she turned around she noticed that there was no longer any section of the structure left on the stone slab, all that there was left was the clothing that was on the human skeleton and the weird raised level that the rest of the dust was sitting on, yet what the large structure was, Annalice still didn’t know. The size and the way that it curved around the plateau suggested that it was over ten kilometres long, but curled up and seemed to be protecting the person that had been sitting there long enough for it to blow away when the stone was moved from where it sat. Yet when Annalice moved the stone, the area of warmth never disappeared, adding to the
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Dragons Pt 1 Ch3
The cavern branched off in three different directions, as though it was a cross road that also led up to the surface via the stone chest. There were four different areas that Annalice could choose to go, including going back up to the surface, knowing that usually the best bet when faced with an odd amount of options was to go for the middle, she headed straight ahead once she had picked up all of her packs.
The path that Annalice picked stretched on for a long ways, and the beam of light from her head lamp wasn’t able to penetrate to the end of her chosen path. Along the way there were many branches off to different areas, but there was always an option to go straight ahead, or Annalice would have ended up horribly lost. Other than the few branches that Annalice discovered along the way, she noticed there were indents in the walls that had doors that led into different areas; Annalice decided that she would go back to those rooms after she had discovered what was at the end of h
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So my parents came up with a name for the Dragon, his name is Elmer. I had no say in the matter, but needless to say the name is going to have to grow on me....
I am currently going through and editing Dragons, so far I have change the intro completely. Changed the flow of the first chapter so that an idea pathway that I have recently come up with can flourish.

From reading the first chapter things have significantly changed (I think anyways) allowing me to be able to go with an idea that will branch through the first part and into the second part. My writing has improved greatly since I started writing this about three years ago, and with your comments on how to help improve things even further I hope to be able to develop my skills even further.


With dimensions I switch between metric and imperial, as I am comfortable with both units of measurements (Canadian problems). So if you have any problems with measurements compare the dimensions to what your used to. If you have ideas for something that I should describe, or if I should use more description on certain objects or characters let me know.
Describing characters has always been difficult for me, but I like to think that I am improving since I first started writing narratives about four years ago.


Currently editing: Chapter 3
Finished: Intro, Chapter 1, Chapter 2

I'll keep you posted on what I change here, so check back weekly to find out how far my slow editing skills are going!

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Mikayla George
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I enjoy reading and writing fantasy, some of what I write are fanficitions. I am also on Figment, so if I don't have everything updated here, you can continue reading over there. I just want to have feedback on my writing.
Feel free to criticise my work, as it can only help me.
I am a busy person with school and other things so it takes time for me to get things done, but don't worry I enjoy writing lots.
If you have any ideas for things that I am writing to further the plot let me know, as I take any ideas into consideration.
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